The trouble is, I wrote it... oh... five, six years ago; it sprang from my head fully formed in the shape it is now in, and since then I've been able to do anything whatsoever with it. It's a nice hook for an adventure; the only problem was, I was never able to come up with the adventure. Still, as I look it over, it's got some nice character bits and it seems a shame to waste them. I'm actually rather proud of the opening.

So I'm playing around with the idea of dumping it here in all its unfinished glory, as a sort of forum exclusive bonus thingy. The question is - does anybody actually want to read a whacking great forum post whose contents are basically a story that failed? With the understanding that A, it's old and a bit clunky style-wise and B, although I'll finish it if by some miracle a notion for doing so comes to me, I don't expect that one will?

--G.
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Benjamin D. Hutchins, Co-Founder, Editor in Chief, Netadmin
Eyrie Productions, Unlimited http://www.eyrie-productions.com/