I do not wish to disparage your efforts; however, Kaitlyn wishes me to note for the record that
a) She already has a Stratocaster and would be unlikely to risk her mortal(?) soul for another one (though for internal rhyme purposes, one supposes you kind of had to - "I'll bet this custom lefty '57 Goldtop Les Paul" doesn't scan or rhyme with anything useful.)
b) "Sweet Child o' Mine"? Seriously, dude? Again, I'll give you "Stairway to Heaven" because you had to make the rhyme work, though I should think you could've gotten something happening with "Sultans of Swing" and "string" there, but, I mean...
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