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"(teaser) An Avatar in New Avalon"
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Or, to give it its rather convoluted full formal style, Chapter 1 of UF/FI: The Legend of Korra, Book 6: Galaxy. You may recall mention of it at the end of And So They Met. The one she found most interesting, and most informative as well, was the Wedge Defense Force museum, which was located on the campus of the WDF Academy, and which she visited on Thursday afternoon. Korra had only a passing interest in military technology or history in themselves, but since the WDF had shaped much of Zetan culture, and it was Zetan culture and its attitude toward the present galaxy she was mainly interested in, it was still a valuable experience. In the end, though, the thing she came away thinking the most about wasn't in the museum itself, but in the rotunda of the Academy's administration building, where she'd found herself at the end of the museum's self-guided audio tour. Among the various artworks and whatnot on display here, there was a large bronze plaque affixed to the wall. Upon entering the room, Korra had taken it for the usual kind of thing one found in buildings like this, with the date of the dedication ceremony and a list of the people who had funded its construction or the like; but that didn't account for the little crowd of uniformed cadets standing there regarding it with deeply thoughtful expressions. Intrigued, she joined them, working her way to the front as those ahead of her got their fill of contemplating the plaque and drifted away. She noticed that, as each cadet took his, her, or its leave, they all reached and touched the lower left corner; already, in the seven years this version of the Academy had been open, this had been done enough that the spot was worn shiny and smooth. Embossed on the plaque in large, authoritative letters were four sentences and an attribution: We do not fight because we hate, nor because we wish to control. We do not kill for killing's own sake. We fight because we love - love life, love freedom, love decency. We kill so that others may live, free from oppression, terror, and pain. - Miria Fallyna Sterling, Class of 2001 Korra got out her little notebook and wrote down the message, then put it away and stood regarding the plaque for several minutes. At length, she went away to think it over in solitude, if such a word could be applied to anyone at large in a city like this one. Solitude within her own mind, anyway, as she moved alone among shoals of strangers, brushing gently against the ebb and flow of New Avalon's pleasantly unfamiliar energies. She went back downtown and just walked around for a while as afternoon slid toward evening, mulling the words over in her mind. Later, while waiting for her dinner in a corner booth of a restaurant near her hotel called the Star of Kumbaria, she found herself jotting them repeatedly on another page of her notebook. By the time she noticed consciously that she was doing it, she'd translated the message into Tukisi, then Tongyu, condensing the text slightly and drawing the characters meticulously in different arrangements, as if designing a tattoo. She supposed, as her soup arrived and she put the notebook away, that that was fitting. In 120 years of living, Korra had never felt sufficiently motivated to get any ink done, but if she ever did, it'd have to be something as meaningful as that, and the words of Miria Sterling - whoever she had been - resonated with her more strongly than anything else she had encountered in this city so far. In fact, the more she thought about it as she ate her supper, the more she decided that if she had to summarize her own personal code in a few sentences, she wouldn't be able to do any better than that. That was promising, if it was meant sincerely, and so far she had the distinct impression that it was. Promising enough that she could feel good about devoting the time and energy required to investigate further.
--G. -><- Benjamin D. Hutchins, Co-Founder, Editor-in-Chief, & Forum Mod Eyrie Productions, Unlimited http://www.eyrie-productions.com/ zgryphon at that email service Google has Ceterum censeo Carthaginem esse delendam. |
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Gryphon
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Mar-12-14, 03:19 PM (EDT) |
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1. "RE: (teaser) An Avatar in New Avalon"
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Nothing? Really? Hmm. How about a joke? They entered the house to find a very beautiful, very pregnant redhead in the front room, putting on shoes. She looked up at their entrance and blinked in faint surprise. "I told you, Kate's with Marty and Eiko," she told Gryphon. "Why aren't you on your way to Tomodachi? I've got everything under control here." Then, straightening up, she picked up a small white duffel bag marked with the 3WA logo from the floor by the couch. "Got my ready bag and everything." She noticed Korra then, standing a trifle hesitantly in the doorway behind Gryphon, and - slightly to her surprise, under the circumstances - gave her a welcoming grin. "Oh, hi," she said. "Kei Morgan. I don't think I've seen you before. Are you Ben's new AA?" "Uh, no," said Korra, slightly nonplussed by her cheerful welcome. "My name's Korra. I'm, uh, consulting with Chief Hutchins on a matter - " Kei laughed merrily and smacked Gryphon's arm. "You didn't waste any time!" she said. "Uh, no, she's serious," he replied, rubbing the arm. "She's looking into one of the side effects of the Ragnarok. And we've only just met, so behave," he added mildly. Korra, who was fairly sure at this point that she was sporting the kind of flaming blush that was obvious even through her dark skin, stammered out some sort of denial as well, but Kei was already past that point. "Well, by a strange coincidence, you are currently beholding -another- side effect of the Ragnarok," the redhead said with a wicked grin. "And I am off to Boyce Memorial to get it seen to."
--G. -><- Benjamin D. Hutchins, Co-Founder, Editor-in-Chief, & Forum Mod Eyrie Productions, Unlimited http://www.eyrie-productions.com/ zgryphon at that email service Google has Ceterum censeo Carthaginem esse delendam. |
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twipper
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Mar-12-14, 03:44 PM (EDT) |
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3. "RE: (teaser) An Avatar in New Avalon"
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LAST EDITED ON Mar-12-14 AT 03:44 PM (EDT) >Nothing? Really? Hmm. > >How about a joke? Sorry, I was off edumacating real estate agents. Both snippets were welcome asides when I got back to the office. :) One has to wonder if anyone has come across Kei's scorecard of Ben's liaisons since her abduction. To the uninformed, said record would likely cause an impressive amount of shock and consternation. Brian
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Gryphon
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Mar-12-14, 03:57 PM (EDT) |
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5. "RE: (teaser) An Avatar in New Avalon"
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LAST EDITED ON Mar-12-14 AT 03:57 PM (EDT) >One has to wonder if anyone has come across Kei's scorecard of Ben's >liaisons since her abduction.I had a hard time parsing this sentence at first - how d'you figure she's been keeping score while she's been gone, and how would anyone run across her notes? And then it was like, "ohhh," as the young people probably don't word it any more. That said, she probably didn't keep any written record of such matters before she went missing, though, being the sort of person that she is, Sumire might. I've said before, though, and still maintain that it isn't as long a document as people seem to think. --G. -><- Benjamin D. Hutchins, Co-Founder, Editor-in-Chief, & Forum Mod Eyrie Productions, Unlimited http://www.eyrie-productions.com/ zgryphon at that email service Google has Ceterum censeo Carthaginem esse delendam. |
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Peter Eng
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Mar-13-14, 01:14 PM (EDT) |
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13. "RE: (teaser) An Avatar in New Avalon"
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>>One has to wonder if anyone has come across Kei's scorecard of Ben's >>liaisons since her abduction. > >I had a hard time parsing this sentence at first - how d'you figure >she's been keeping score while she's been gone, and how would anyone >run across her notes? And then it was like, "ohhh," as the young >people probably don't word it any more. > >That said, she probably didn't keep any written record of such matters >before she went missing, though, being the sort of person that >she is, Sumire might. I've said before, though, and still maintain >that it isn't as long a document as people seem to think. >Given Kei's sense of humor, I imagine her saying, "Ben. I was apparently dead for two years, and do you go out and find new women? No! You really have to get out more..." before her straight face falls apart. Peter Eng -- Insert humorous comment here. |
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Gryphon
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Mar-12-14, 03:53 PM (EDT) |
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4. "RE: (teaser) An Avatar in New Avalon"
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>Not being familiar with the source material beyond what's been >presented here, I'm assuming 'Tukisi and Tongyu' are kanji-type >character-based scripts? Partly, yeah, though it's not actually a source-material conceit, but rather something that's evolved as we've developed the UF version of Dìqiú. Canonically, everybody in the Avatar world seems to speak English and write in Mandarin Chinese, which is a bit weird, but, you know, alternate universe and all. In the UF universe, the nations of Dìqiú each have their own language, and each one is (for reasons of interdimensional weirdness) roughly identical to some archaic Earth language. (This is mentioned in the Dìqiú BPGD file, and a couple of times in the Dìqiú Suite annotations.) Anyway, Tukisi is Korra's native language, the language of the Water Tribes, and is based on Inuktitut, the language of the Inuit people of the eastern Canadian Arctic (as opposed to Inuvialuk, which is the Inuit language of western Canada). It uses a syllabic script that is difficult to render on the Web (and in which, interestingly, there isn't actually a way to write "Korra" or any other name with an O sound in it - the closest you can get is technically something like Kuura). Tongyu, meanwhile, is the Earth Kingdom language and, sort of by default, the international language of trade and commerce in Dìqiú, and is basically 19th-century Mandarin. That means it's written in hanzi (what the Japanese call kanji). Basically, the message is probably a lot more concise written in Tongyu, but more interesting to look at if you don't know what it says in Tukisi. :) --G. -><- Benjamin D. Hutchins, Co-Founder, Editor-in-Chief, & Forum Mod Eyrie Productions, Unlimited http://www.eyrie-productions.com/ zgryphon at that email service Google has Ceterum censeo Carthaginem esse delendam. |
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SpottedKitty
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Mar-12-14, 08:09 PM (EDT) |
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8. "RE: (teaser) An Avatar in New Avalon"
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>Renders correctly on my Mac, anyway. Looks OK, or at least non-errored, here as well; Win7 with Firefox. Hmm, looks a bit like Shavian. What is the subrange name for that set, anyway? Can't seem to find anything that looks like that, and I thought I had a pretty good variety of non-Western fonts. -- Unable to save the day: File is read-only. |
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Gryphon
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Mar-12-14, 08:28 PM (EDT) |
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10. "RE: (teaser) An Avatar in New Avalon"
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LAST EDITED ON Mar-12-14 AT 08:29 PM (EDT) >>Renders correctly on my Mac, anyway. > >Looks OK, or at least non-errored, here as well; Win7 with Firefox. > >Hmm, looks a bit like Shavian.The function is similar. The Canadian Aboriginal Syllabic system was invented by a white missionary as a simpler alternative to romanization that would be easier for people who didn't already know how to write English to learn, and one of the sources he drew on for inspiration was his own knowledge of shorthand. (He was actually working with the First Nations in the Canadian Midwest; only later was his system further adapted to Inuktitut, which also evidently didn't have a written form before white people. So there actually is a CAS symbol for O sounds, but it isn't used with Inuktitut because that language doesn't have any such phonemes. The producers of Avatar presumably did not know this when they based the Water Tribes on the Inuit and then named one of their Water Tribe protagonists "Sokka". :) Dìqiú being Dìqiú, we may safely assume that the written form of Tukisi was developed by the Water Tribes themselves and is not a peculiar manifestation of colonial paternalism. >What is the subrange name for that set, anyway? The Wikipedia page says "Unicode range: Unified Canadian Aboriginal Syllabics, U+1400–167F", for whatever that's worth. There also appears to be a specific page for the Canadian Aboriginal Syllabics Unicode block. --G. -><- Benjamin D. Hutchins, Co-Founder, Editor-in-Chief, & Forum Mod Eyrie Productions, Unlimited http://www.eyrie-productions.com/ zgryphon at that email service Google has Ceterum censeo Carthaginem esse delendam. |
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JeanneHedge
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Mar-12-14, 08:47 PM (EDT) |
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11. "RE: (teaser) An Avatar in New Avalon"
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Very nice (both of them), although I'm wondering how I managed to miss And So They Met. > She supposed, as her soup arrived and she put the notebook away, >that that was fitting. In 120 years of living, Korra had never felt >sufficiently motivated to get any ink done, but if she ever did, it'd >have to be something as meaningful as that, and the words of Miria >Sterling - whoever she had been - resonated with her more strongly than >anything else she had encountered in this city so far. In fact, the >more she thought about it as she ate her supper, the more she decided >that if she had to summarize her own personal code in a few sentences, >she wouldn't be able to do any better than that.
Someone introduce Korra to Mirya please.
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Gryphon
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Mar-14-14, 02:27 PM (EDT) |
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14. "RE: (teaser) An Avatar in New Avalon"
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Hey, it's Friday afternoon at the end of spring break (if you can call a vacation marked by a 20-inch snowstorm that with a straight face - I can't :). Here's one last snippet to take into the weekend. After the game, as she was making her way out of the park (and marveling at the evidently undampened good cheer of the team's fanbase), she noticed the uniformed police officers standing here and there around the place - near the turnstiles and doorways, mostly. They didn't seem to be -doing- much of anything, just kind of standing around showing the flag. As Korra stood by one of the pretzel stands on the concourse behind the main grandstand and watched, a couple of them interacted with members of the public, providing directions and the like, always with a sort of casual goodwill that went well with the overall vibe of the city as she had so far experienced it. While she watched, she considered the equivalent of this scene back home. Republic City cops, as a general rule, were no longer so naturally disposed to dabble in jackbooted thuggery as they had once been, but in Korra's experience, they did not smile at members of the public. Particularly not in a crowd control scenario, like letting-out time at Shiro Shinobi Arena. Picture Lin Beifong ruffling some kid's hair and making sure he doesn't lose his foam WE'RE #1! hand, she thought, and the mental image made her giggle as she made to leave the ballpark herself, now that the crowd at the exit had thinned a bit. As she turned, she saw another uniformed figure at the end of the row of turnstiles. At the sight of this one, she pulled up short, blinking in momentary disbelief, then walked slowly over for a closer look. Standing next to the big one-way revolving gate through which a lot of people were leaving, there was... a bear. A -polar- bear, white-furred and massive, a good six feet tall at the shoulder, dressed in what was essentially the regular New Avalon police uniform as adapted for a bear. He even, Korra noticed, had a necktie and a badge. He was -all- bear, a configuration as mythical in Diqiu as the more familiar polar bear dogs of her homeworld were out here, but familiar enough to bring an automatic grin to Korra's face as she approached him. Knights fans filed past him and through the gate; some, particularly the children, took notice of him, but no one seemed to think it was at all -strange- that a polar bear in a police uniform was standing next to the exit, watching them leave. Presently the bear appeared to notice that he was being scrutinized more closely than usual. Turning his attention from the passing sports fans, he regarded Korra with an expression that almost seemed to say, "Yes?" "Wow," said Korra aloud. "They use -bears- for policing here?" She grinned. "There might be more going on in this town than I thought." Then, looking thoughtfully around, she mused, "Where's your handler got off to, big guy?" The bear arched a brow ridge and replied, "I beg your pardon?" Korra stared at him, her eyes going wide; she resisted an urge to rub them theatrically and said, "Did you say something?" "Yeeeees?" the bear replied, becoming still more quizzical. He had a voice that went with the rest of him, deep and rich, fully appropriate to have emanated from such a massive chest. "You can -talk,-" said Korra. "Of course I can talk, I'm Minister for Overseas Development," the bear deadpanned.
--G. -><- Benjamin D. Hutchins, Co-Founder, Editor-in-Chief, & Forum Mod Eyrie Productions, Unlimited http://www.eyrie-productions.com/ zgryphon at that email service Google has Ceterum censeo Carthaginem esse delendam. |
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