Can I notice long enough to applaud the removal? The script format grates on me in general, but it really bugs me here, because I'm used to finding the stories in third-person, or the occasional first-person. I like the intent of Altered Appleseed, but the presentation was unappealing.

Peter Eng
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Also, I imagine you could write the story again, hit the most important plot points, and make it much better if you really needed to.