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Gryphon
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Jul-31-18, 10:32 AM (EDT) |
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12. "RE: TFLF Chapter 16: Discovery"
In response to message #11
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LAST EDITED ON Jul-31-18 AT 03:36 PM (EDT) >I enjoyed this, but I don't have a lot to say, just that after >listening to the track again, I think that > >make it better >do it faster >makes us stronger >more than ever >hour after >our work is never over > >(as reported in the fic) should actually be > >make it better >do it faster >makes us stronger >more than ever >hour after hour >work is never over > >Not entirely sure, but it seems to make a bit more sense? I'm pretty sure it's a play on the homophones (that is to say, it's both, but there's no really good way of depicting that symbolically); "our work is never over" turns up by itself several times. --G. -><- Benjamin D. Hutchins, Co-Founder, Editor-in-Chief, & Forum Mod Eyrie Productions, Unlimited http://www.eyrie-productions.com/ zgryphon at that email service Google has Ceterum censeo Carthaginem esse delendam. |
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