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Peter Eng
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Dec-02-20, 02:39 AM (EDT) |
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26. "RE: OWaW 21: Sea Trials"
In response to message #24
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LAST EDITED ON Dec-02-20 AT 02:39 AM (EST) > >The problem--well, a problem, we are uncovering a lot of >problems with this particular plotline tonight--is that I don't have >any readily evident way to convey any of the above in the narrative. >The way the thing has to go down, she just shows up and Is a Problem. >G doesn't have a way, or the time, to learn any of it before he has to >deal with her. He'd probably be more sympathetic to her situation if >he did, even though she's coming after him. >So the first chance he has to figure this out will probably be when she opens up with her usual opening strike (flawless form, of course) and doesn't get her usual solid hit, with 90% chance of outright victory. Annoying. The information he needs to avoid the fight can't possibly arrive until after the fight starts. Peter Eng -- (I have no idea how much trouble I'd have avoided if I had all the information I needed before trying to deal, other than "a lot.") |
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