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Peter Eng
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3. "RE: OWaW 21.1: Sea Trials Mk II Mod 0"
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   That feels much better. I like that Neuroi-chan managed to express how she feels about not being able to communicate with Yoshika, the fight added that je ne sais quoi, and Marisa calling out Reimu helps bring more depth to her.

Also, introducing Yoshika's new Striker works better for me; it's something like an inversion of Chekov's Gun (If somebody is shot with a gun, it should be placed in the plot beforehand?)

In metaphorical summary, I like the remodel you did, and I think that the deck you added is an excellent touch.

Peter Eng
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   RE: OWaW 21.1: Sea Trials Mk II Mod 0 Astynax Dec-02-20 1
      RE: OWaW 21.1: Sea Trials Mk II Mod 0 Gryphonadmin Dec-03-20 7
   RE: OWaW 21.1: Sea Trials Mk II Mod 0 Droken Dec-02-20 2
  RE: OWaW 21.1: Sea Trials Mk II Mod 0 Peter Eng Dec-02-20 3
      RE: OWaW 21.1: Sea Trials Mk II Mod 0 Peter Eng Dec-03-20 5
          RE: OWaW 21.1: Sea Trials Mk II Mod 0 Silversword Dec-03-20 13
              RE: OWaW 21.1: Sea Trials Mk II Mod 0 Peter Eng Dec-03-20 14
                  RE: OWaW 21.1: Sea Trials Mk II Mod 0 StClair Dec-03-20 15
                      RE: OWaW 21.1: Sea Trials Mk II Mod 0 Gryphonadmin Dec-03-20 16
                          RE: OWaW 21.1: Sea Trials Mk II Mod 0 Zemyla Dec-03-20 17
                              RE: OWaW 21.1: Sea Trials Mk II Mod 0 Gryphonadmin Dec-03-20 18
                              RE: OWaW 21.1: Sea Trials Mk II Mod 0 Astynax Dec-03-20 19
                      RE: OWaW 21.1: Sea Trials Mk II Mod 0 SpottedKitty Dec-03-20 20
   RE: OWaW 21.1: Sea Trials Mk II Mod 0 Zemyla Dec-02-20 4
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          RE: OWaW 21.1: Sea Trials Mk II Mod 0 Gryphonadmin Dec-03-20 8
              RE: OWaW 21.1: Sea Trials Mk II Mod 0 Peter Eng Dec-03-20 10
                  RE: OWaW 21.1: Sea Trials Mk II Mod 0 Gryphonadmin Dec-03-20 11
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      RE: OWaW 21.1: Sea Trials Mk II Mod 0 Gryphonadmin Dec-03-20 9
   RE: OWaW 21.1: Sea Trials Mk II Mod 0 Gryphonadmin Dec-15-20 21
      RE: OWaW 21.1: Sea Trials Mk II Mod 0 Zemyla Dec-15-20 23
          RE: OWaW 21.1: Sea Trials Mk II Mod 0 Astynax Dec-15-20 24
          RE: OWaW 21.1: Sea Trials Mk II Mod 0 Gryphonadmin Dec-15-20 28
      RE: OWaW 21.1: Sea Trials Mk II Mod 0 Astynax Dec-15-20 25
          RE: OWaW 21.1: Sea Trials Mk II Mod 0 Peter Eng Dec-15-20 26
              RE: OWaW 21.1: Sea Trials Mk II Mod 0 pjmoyermoderator Dec-15-20 27
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