Honestly I was half-expecting to be Remonstrated With so this is by far the better outcome

>(got a bit sidetracked with the holidays and whatnot, and hung up on
>some of the details of the next part, but the main points of it have
>been in my head the whole time. don't you hate that? I hate that.
>sandworms! you hate 'em too, right?)

I know exactly how you feel. My multi-chapter fic's second arc was meant to have been ready for posting in April. It, uh. It's still coming, it's just gonna take a minute. And some editing.

oh god send help

>[ed. note "Rinjokes"? ... no, I, I'm
>sorry, I'll wait in the car]

That was actually pretty funny. Funnier than my puns are, at any rate. =]

>>Rittmeister von Katädien's smiling face would do that to a girl -
>>many girls, in fact, and girl-adjacent identities of countless places
>
>(and possibly a dude or two, though I've been yelled at before for not
>paying attention to that possibility on screen. fun fact, though, did
>you know that General Zargh and his adjutant Krattak are
>par'Mach'kai? it's true!)

"The bat'leth has many cutting edges, General. It is honourable for a warrior to swing two ways at least."

>>"I'll find you, Gryphon. I have to find you. I have to. If
>>anyone can get me home, it's you."
>
>Fortunately, he's not hard to find!

Hard to find, not terribly. Hard to get to? For Her Royal Girlfailureness Bin BenBose, a young woman with no powers, no proximity to the front lines, and the military importance of a three-legged Blackpool beach donkey? Rather more so.

While I was tempted to give her witch powers with Snebby as her familiar, I think it works better this way. UF-G is just one man, after all. He can't be everywhere. Rin's little dimensional displacement problem is an example of something he just didn't know had happened; something well within his power to correct or prevent, but which he would have to be aware of in order to do so. Space is a big place.

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"She's old, she's lame, she's barren too, // "She's not worth feed or hay, // "But I'll give her this," - he blew smoke at me - // "She was something in her day." -- Garnet Rogers, Small Victory

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