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10. "RE: OWaW 11, and a note on logistics"
In response to message #3
 
   >Now, now, you don't know that. Maybe he just didn't want to wait
>around for his court-martial, and he'll get clear of the war zone,
>live someplace in quiet seclusion, and never bother anyone again.
>
>... You're not buying it, are you.

You would have a better chance at being believed if the angel's halo wasn't being balanced on the devil's horns. ;)

Though you could throw readers a curve by having his situation dealt with off-screen. It often amused me in stories where a 'defeated' villain escaped and the heroes get psyched up for a return match only to find out he was taken down by someone else. There never is enough of those.

When in Danger, or in Doubt.
Run in circles, scream and shout.


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 OWaW 11, and a note on logistics [View All] Gryphonadmin Mar-28-15 TOP
   RE: OWaW 11, and a note on logistics Droken Mar-28-15 1
   RE: OWaW 11, and a note on logistics Matrix Dragon Mar-29-15 2
      RE: OWaW 11, and a note on logistics Gryphonadmin Mar-29-15 3
          RE: OWaW 11, and a note on logistics Proginoskes Mar-29-15 4
              RE: OWaW 11, and a note on logistics Gryphonadmin Mar-29-15 6
          RE: OWaW 11, and a note on logistics McFortner Mar-29-15 5
          RE: OWaW 11, and a note on logistics Matrix Dragon Mar-30-15 7
              RE: OWaW 11, and a note on logistics Terminus Est Mar-30-15 8
                  RE: OWaW 11, and a note on logistics Gryphonadmin Mar-30-15 12
                      RE: OWaW 11, and a note on logistics Terminus Est Mar-31-15 15
          RE: OWaW 11, and a note on logistics ebony14 Mar-30-15 9
              RE: OWaW 11, and a note on logistics Tabasco Mar-31-15 17
                  RE: OWaW 11, and a note on logistics goldenfire Mar-31-15 19
                  RE: OWaW 11, and a note on logistics Bushido Apr-02-15 25
         RE: OWaW 11, and a note on logistics Arashi Mar-30-15 10
      RE: OWaW 11, and a note on logistics rwpikul Mar-30-15 11
          RE: OWaW 11, and a note on logistics SpottedKitty Mar-30-15 13
              RE: OWaW 11, and a note on logistics Terminus Est Mar-31-15 14
                  RE: OWaW 11, and a note on logistics ebony14 Mar-31-15 16
                      RE: OWaW 11, and a note on logistics mouse_rr Apr-01-15 20
                          RE: OWaW 11, and a note on logistics zwol Apr-01-15 21
                              RE: OWaW 11, and a note on logistics Gryphonadmin Apr-01-15 22
                              RE: OWaW 11, and a note on logistics mouse_rr Apr-01-15 23
                          RE: OWaW 11, and a note on logistics Croaker Apr-03-15 27
   RE: OWaW 11, and a note on logistics ebony14 Mar-31-15 18
      RE: OWaW 11, and a note on logistics Mephronmoderator Apr-02-15 24
          RE: OWaW 11, and a note on logistics BobSchroeck Apr-02-15 26
              RE: OWaW 11, and a note on logistics Star Ranger4 Apr-05-15 28
                  RE: OWaW 11, and a note on logistics BobSchroeck Apr-06-15 29


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