"Dad, we're going to have to finish this later," Kate said, peering thoughtfully across the courtyard into the living room window. "Some guys just broke into the place and Juri is killing them to death."
This seems like a really bad idea, considering the company those two keep. Anyone attempting to kidnap either of those ladies wouldn't be found in any condition to accost anything. The visual had me laughing for ten minutes...
The bit with Anakin and Saionji...makes me want to read more of what exactly is going on with those guys, even if the second fragment wouldn't ever come to anything.
And while the audiobook project is great, I'd rather there were new stories. Feels like there are a few outstanding (both excellent and unresolved) plots that I'm certain a lot of us fans would eagerly read, re-read, comment on, re-re-read, and thank you for. Of course, I like pretty much everything EPU has put out.
I know as a fan, I should not bitch, and believe me, I am not. Just my opinion, and worth less than you paid for it.