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45. "RE: Try, Try Again"
In response to message #44
 
   >The audios have honestly been a massive help to me over the last
>couple of years.
>I look forward to them a lot, and I'm extremely grateful that you've
>put the time in.

Well, I'm glad to know they're helping. One unanticipated side benefit for me I've discovered, since I started trying to do concurrent audio on the new releases (as opposed to recording the back catalog, which I still hope to find time to do more of when things aren't quite so hot on the textmaking front as they are right now), is that reading the whole thing out loud makes for a dandy (if time-consuming) last proofreading pass. Mistakes that the eye glides seamlessly over can trip the tongue in a way that makes them much harder to miss (albeit not impossible).

>The way it ended, with just the tableau of an empty rose gate as the
>final 'image', just put me in mind of something going Very Badly Wrong
>and the teleportees arriving in somewhere very unpleasant. In
>fairness, that could just be the Game of Thrones fan in me expecting
>you to torture your characters.

Oh. No, not so much this time. We just thought it would be a fun bit of symmetry to end with a reverse of the scene in which Korra arrived.

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