wow. Aside from the other points brought up so far; this chapter really drives home WHY the Federation will live forever... to wit its dedication to its fellow members and their willingness to close ranks and support each other in whatever way they can.
In some very real ways whats impressing me the most is the level of craftsmanship I'm seeing in how you've handled some seemingly minor bits, like explaining why we never see Yui and Ui's parents "On Camera", yet show that the girls are also not completely without adult guardianship/supervision.
Nomad Air, Huh? from the sound of Yui's dad, their a lot better than these guys
Of COURSE you wernt expecting it! No One expects the FANNISH INQUISITION! RCW# 86