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36. "RE: (OOTR-17) Cantata for Warships in D"
In response to message #32
 
   >I know you're always kind of reticient about using magic as a plot
>point in UF, but I think you handled it well here*. You've set up the
>backstory well enough to have the Actual God Powers be a last-resort
>sort of thing, and written the actual escalation of responses and
>subsequent effects of pulling out the trump card to give the feeling
>of "that was epic, but I hope he doesn't have to do that again any
>time soon". Making Corwin a deus machinarum without making it
>into a deus ex machina, if you will. :) Good show!

I can just see it now. Corwin's finally starting to regain some semblance of coherence when his mother shows up carrying/levitating a whole bunch of file boxes.

"Mom? What's all this?"

"It's from Njord. He said something along the lines of, 'You made the mess, you fill out the paperwork for it!'"

(Corwin buries himself back under the covers.)

Offsides

And now we know why you only break the seal as a last resort :)

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   RE: (OOTR-17) Cantata for Warships in D Verbena Sep-06-15 1
      RE: (OOTR-17) Cantata for Warships in D Gryphonadmin Sep-07-15 4
      RE: (OOTR-17) Cantata for Warships in D TsukaiStarburst Sep-09-15 27
          RE: (OOTR-17) Cantata for Warships in D Gryphonadmin Sep-09-15 31
   RE: (OOTR-17) Cantata for Warships in D TheOtherSean Sep-07-15 2
   RE: (OOTR-17) Cantata for Warships in D Bakuryu_Hitsuri Sep-07-15 5
      RE: (OOTR-17) Cantata for Warships in D BobSchroeck Sep-07-15 6
          RE: (OOTR-17) Cantata for Warships in D TheOtherSean Sep-07-15 8
          RE: (OOTR-17) Cantata for Warships in D Verbena Sep-07-15 9
   RE: (OOTR-17) Cantata for Warships in D Droken Sep-07-15 7
   RE: (OOTR-17) Cantata for Warships in D TsukaiStarburst Sep-08-15 10
   RE: (OOTR-17) Cantata for Warships in D Nova Floresca Sep-08-15 11
      RE: (OOTR-17) Cantata for Warships in D Gryphonadmin Sep-08-15 15
          RE: (OOTR-17) Cantata for Warships in D Nova Floresca Sep-08-15 19
              RE: (OOTR-17) Cantata for Warships in D Gryphonadmin Sep-08-15 20
   RE: (OOTR-17) Cantata for Warships in D zwol Sep-08-15 12
      RE: (OOTR-17) Cantata for Warships in D Peter Eng Sep-08-15 13
          RE: (OOTR-17) Cantata for Warships in D SpottedKitty Sep-08-15 14
      RE: (OOTR-17) Cantata for Warships in D Gryphonadmin Sep-08-15 16
   RE: (OOTR-17) Cantata for Warships in D DaPatman89 Sep-08-15 17
      RE: (OOTR-17) Cantata for Warships in D Gryphonadmin Sep-08-15 18
          RE: (OOTR-17) Cantata for Warships in D Peter Eng Sep-09-15 28
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              RE: (OOTR-17) Cantata for Warships in D ebony14 Sep-09-15 34
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   RE: (OOTR-17) Cantata for Warships in D TheOtherSean Sep-08-15 21
      RE: (OOTR-17) Cantata for Warships in D Gryphonadmin Sep-08-15 22
          RE: (OOTR-17) Cantata for Warships in D TheOtherSean Sep-09-15 23
              RE: (OOTR-17) Cantata for Warships in D Gryphonadmin Sep-09-15 24
                  RE: (OOTR-17) Cantata for Warships in D ebony14 Sep-09-15 35
                      RE: (OOTR-17) Cantata for Warships in D Gryphonadmin Sep-09-15 39
                          RE: (OOTR-17) Cantata for Warships in D ebony14 Sep-09-15 42
                              RE: (OOTR-17) Cantata for Warships in D Verbena Sep-10-15 50
   RE: (OOTR-17) Cantata for Warships in D Verbena Sep-09-15 25
      RE: (OOTR-17) Cantata for Warships in D Gryphonadmin Sep-09-15 26
          RE: (OOTR-17) Cantata for Warships in D bargamer Sep-09-15 30
          RE: (OOTR-17) Cantata for Warships in D Tabasco Sep-09-15 41
              RE: (OOTR-17) Cantata for Warships in D Gryphonadmin Sep-09-15 43
                  RE: (OOTR-17) Cantata for Warships in D SpottedKitty Sep-09-15 46
   RE: (OOTR-17) Cantata for Warships in D Meagen Sep-09-15 32
     RE: (OOTR-17) Cantata for Warships in D Offsides Sep-09-15 36
          RE: (OOTR-17) Cantata for Warships in D Gryphonadmin Sep-09-15 38
              RE: (OOTR-17) Cantata for Warships in D Verbena Sep-09-15 44
                  RE: (OOTR-17) Cantata for Warships in D Gryphonadmin Sep-09-15 45
                      RE: (OOTR-17) Cantata for Warships in D Verbena Sep-09-15 47
                          RE: (OOTR-17) Cantata for Warships in D Gryphonadmin Sep-09-15 48
                              RE: (OOTR-17) Cantata for Warships in D Verbena Sep-10-15 49
                                  RE: (OOTR-17) Cantata for Warships in D TsukaiStarburst Sep-10-15 51
                              RE: (OOTR-17) Cantata for Warships in D Offsides Sep-10-15 52
                              RE: (OOTR-17) Cantata for Warships in D CdrMike Sep-10-15 53
      RE: (OOTR-17) Cantata for Warships in D jonathanlennox Sep-09-15 37
          RE: (OOTR-17) Cantata for Warships in D Gryphonadmin Sep-09-15 40
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