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dbrandon
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Jul-31-18, 09:45 AM (EDT) |
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11. "RE: TFLF Chapter 16: Discovery"
In response to message #0
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I enjoyed this, but I don't have a lot to say, just that after listening to the track again, I think that make it better do it faster makes us stronger more than ever hour after our work is never over (as reported in the fic) should actually be make it better do it faster makes us stronger more than ever hour after hour work is never over Not entirely sure, but it seems to make a bit more sense? --dbrandon |
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