So let me just get out there that I'm very fond of your art, especially the coloration. I'm not going to pretend that I know anything about art, or that I can offer a coherent critique, like I can for the stories themselves, but thank you for all the effort you put into these.

As for this particular one, Korra must have felt like she had a dagger in her chest the first time she saw Minami all grown up...

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this world created by the
hands of the gods
everything is false
everything is a LIE
the final days have come
now
let everything be destroyed

--mu