4. "RE: Self-Promotion: My Harry Potter Fanfic"
In response to message #2
The plot is predicated on things that doesn't exist...ok, so, why are you on a page that contains fanfiction predicated on things that doesn't exist? Sirius clearly called Harry "pup", as the story shows. The Magna Carta would have a LOT of relevance to law as pertaining to the Wizarding world...or did you somehow miss that this is a Harry Potter fanfic?
Seriously, if you're going to bash it, at least do so with some measure of wit. Because this is just a sad attempt att faultfinding.