1. "RE: The Final Simulation: A Split Infinitive Mini-Story"
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Great account of UF-Gryph's encounter with the Kobayashi Maru! That scene is one of the most controversial in the new movie (they've been throwing four-letter words at each other over it on SD.net), so I was curious to see what you'd make of it. I was delighted to make Gaila's acquaintance again; that young lady only really had the one significant scene, but she draws attention like the proverbial lodestone. Also enjoyed the way Gryphon and Saavik adapted old-school naval talk to the business at hand (good adaptation of "weathergage" to modern-day conditions)!