19. "RE: The Final Simulation: A Split Infinitive Mini-Story"
In response to message #0
LAST EDITED ON May-15-09 AT 06:41 PM (EDT)
You're very good at this. The only way it could've been better, was if you'd left out all the references to the new movie (but that's a matter of personal taste, not your writing skill).
“They planned their campaigns just as you might make a splendid piece of harness. It looks very well; and answers very well; until it gets broken; and then you are done for. Now I made my campaigns of ropes. If anything went wrong, I tied a knot; and went on.” -- Arthur Wellesley, First Duke of Wellington