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3. "RE: Omnibus 4!"
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   LAST EDITED ON Aug-27-09 AT 04:31 PM (EDT)
 
>I am guessing the interjections are the result of Utena reading (or
>watching?) a dramatized version of her escapade with some, shall we
>say, minor embellishments on what actually happened.

I got the impression that the first part of the story was a flashback, up to the point where Utena got clocked in the head. Note that the italicized comments--and conflicting realities--stop when she regains consciousness.

And I agree, _highly_ enjoyable.

Oh, and picturing Gryphon in the style of Akio? I'll bet that hurt Utena's head nearly as much as the blunt trauma... :)

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   RE: Omnibus 4! Gryphonadmin Aug-27-09 1
      RE: Omnibus 4! eriktown Aug-27-09 2
         RE: Omnibus 4! Zox Aug-27-09 3
              RE: Omnibus 4! Star Ranger4 Aug-27-09 4
                  RE: Omnibus 4! Offsides Aug-28-09 12
   RE: Omnibus 4! Tabasco Aug-27-09 5
   RE: Omnibus 4! Prince Charon Aug-28-09 6
      RE: Omnibus 4! Rickdominated Aug-28-09 7
          RE: Omnibus 4! Zox Aug-28-09 8
          RE: Omnibus 4! JeanneHedge Aug-28-09 9
              RE: Omnibus 4! dbrandon Aug-28-09 10
              RE: Omnibus 4! Star Ranger4 Aug-28-09 11
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