>>I am guessing the interjections are the result of Utena reading (or
>>watching?) a dramatized version of her escapade with some, shall we
>>say, minor embellishments on what actually happened.
>
>I got the impression that the first part of the story was a flashback,
>up to the point where Utena got clocked in the head. Note that the
>italicized comments--and conflicting realities--stop when she regains
>consciousness.
>
>And I agree, _highly_ enjoyable.
>
>Oh, and picturing Gryphon in the style of Akio? I'll bet that hurt
>Utena's head nearly as much as the blunt trauma... :) those points threw me for a while the first time through, till I realised that the italics were Utena thinking to herself.
But let me point out something to you. In addition to being flashbacks, we're looking at Utena's dreams/halucinations as she works her way back to conciousness after having gotten clocked by the spanner. Hence the freaky wierd background imagery straight out of a RGU episode going on behind the actual action.
Actually, thats not what caught my attention during the whole piece, it was only a touch of a bwaaa? Well, it'll make sense down the road.
What got me, and my hats off to you is AbleSpacer Tetch. It took a while for my brain's index function to pull the match... and my hats off to you G.
Now, if you all will excuse me, I have a section of my subconcious to have flogged around the fleet for a sniggering bevis and butthead comment it made about Tech attaching himself to her as the pilot of the Cap'ns Gig.
Of COURSE you wernt
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