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8. "RE: (S33) S3M1 Ad Astra"
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>883 You'd have excellent penmanship too if you had repeated the
>seventh grade a hundred times.

Bwaahahahaha!



>1233 Mind you, she'd only be doing it as a favor for a friend.
>She certainly wouldn't get anything out of it. A completely selfless
>act. Yeah.

That's our Kozue. Selflessly offering Corwin nookie for purely medicinal purposes. ^_^



>1564 G'Kron! It's been a while since we got G'Kron onto the
>screen.

We were starting to think he had vanished to Narn-ia.



>1984 Some people complained that this scene was a bit
>heavy-handed - Clarissa bumbles like Dirk Dastardly - but I thought it
>was important to establish that Clarissa's early attempts at villainy
>were very clumsy, to better contrast what she will eventually
>become.

That's exactly how it came across, in a sort of "Baby's First Evil Scheme" way.

Also I noticed that, given this attempted arson and the later attempt at firebombing the concert, Clarissa already displayed a certain affinity for... ahem... Large-scale Conflagration.



>2449 This is part of a joke coming up later in the story, but
>apparently I made it too subtle - most people didn't catch it.

I was wondering what this bit was about, but as soon as the station changed color, it was obvious in retrospect.



>3043 In retrospect, this whole Valiant thing fails on a
>few levels.

Yeah, when the story took this sudden turn, unexpectedly veering off from Boarding School Street onto Space Opera Boulevard, it left me a little dizzy and confused. "Whoah, I didn't know you could even get there from here..."

Now, of course, I'm used to it and wouldn't have it any other way - but at the time I was seriously wondering whether those things I saw coming up in the distance were maybe a shark and a ramp.


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