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15. "RE: CR/NF: Holiday in the Sun"
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>The Gelth I expected.

This produces a deeply entertaining mental image, inasmuch as the Gelth are the shrieky murderous ethereal aliens from the Charles Dickens episode of Doctor Who ("I'm gonna die in a dungeon! In Cardiff!"), not the rogue AI constructs from Mass Effect. :)

>The shacking up offer, I did not. Nor did I
>expect, after all this time, for Gryph to be so broken.

It's interesting that the scene gives you the impression that he's "broken", since that's not at all the effect I was aiming for. I mean, yes, he's bit preoccupied in that last scene, but that's largely because the sudden and unexpected encounter with the dread shadow of Unicron has quite knocked his other train of thought all ahoo and he needs to take a couple of moments to chase it all back into order again before he can articulate it, not because he's having some kind of a breakdown.

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   RE: CR/NF: Holiday in the Sun Droken Apr-07-11 1
      RE: CR/NF: Holiday in the Sun Prince Charon Apr-13-11 46
   RE: CR/NF: Holiday in the Sun Matrix Dragon Apr-07-11 2
      RE: CR/NF: Holiday in the Sun Gryphonadmin Apr-07-11 8
   RE: CR/NF: Holiday in the Sun WengFook Apr-07-11 3
      RE: CR/NF: Holiday in the Sun Gryphonadmin Apr-07-11 6
   RE: CR/NF: Holiday in the Sun mdg1 Apr-07-11 4
   RE: CR/NF: Holiday in the Sun Bushido Apr-07-11 5
      RE: CR/NF: Holiday in the Sun WereVulture Apr-07-11 7
      RE: CR/NF: Holiday in the Sun Gryphonadmin Apr-07-11 9
          RE: CR/NF: Holiday in the Sun Star Ranger4 Apr-07-11 11
      RE: CR/NF: Holiday in the Sun Terminus Est Apr-07-11 10
          RE: CR/NF: Holiday in the Sun Senji Apr-07-11 12
              RE: CR/NF: Holiday in the Sun Terminus Est Apr-07-11 13
   RE: CR/NF: Holiday in the Sun trigger Apr-07-11 14
     RE: CR/NF: Holiday in the Sun Gryphonadmin Apr-07-11 15
          RE: CR/NF: Holiday in the Sun The Traitor Apr-08-11 17
          RE: CR/NF: Holiday in the Sun Matrix Dragon Apr-08-11 18
              RE: CR/NF: Holiday in the Sun trigger Apr-08-11 19
                  RE: CR/NF: Holiday in the Sun Gryphonadmin Apr-08-11 20
                      RE: CR/NF: Holiday in the Sun trboturtle2 Apr-08-11 21
                          RE: CR/NF: Holiday in the Sun Gryphonadmin Apr-08-11 22
                              RE: CR/NF: Holiday in the Sun Apostate_Soul Apr-16-11 47
                              RE: CR/NF: Holiday in the Sun Bushido Apr-17-11 48
                              RE: CR/NF: Holiday in the Sun The Traitor Apr-17-11 49
                                  RE: CR/NF: Holiday in the Sun trboturtle2 Apr-17-11 50
              RE: CR/NF: Holiday in the Sun BeardedFerret Apr-09-11 23
   I should point out... Gryphonadmin Apr-07-11 16
   RE: CR/NF: Holiday in the Sun Bodhi Apr-09-11 24
      RE: CR/NF: Holiday in the Sun Eric Heckathorn Apr-09-11 25
      RE: CR/NF: Holiday in the Sun Gryphonadmin Apr-09-11 26
          RE: CR/NF: Holiday in the Sun Eric Heckathorn Apr-09-11 27
              RE: CR/NF: Holiday in the Sun Gryphonadmin Apr-09-11 28
                  RE: CR/NF: Holiday in the Sun Star Ranger4 Apr-10-11 29
                  RE: CR/NF: Holiday in the Sun Meagen Apr-10-11 30
   RE: CR/NF: Holiday in the Sun Bitstream Apr-10-11 31
      RE: CR/NF: Holiday in the Sun JFerio Apr-10-11 32
          RE: CR/NF: Holiday in the Sun Gryphonadmin Apr-10-11 33
              RE: CR/NF: Holiday in the Sun dstar Apr-11-11 38
          RE: CR/NF: Holiday in the Sun Bitstream Apr-10-11 34
              RE: CR/NF: Holiday in the Sun dstar Apr-11-11 37
                  RE: CR/NF: Holiday in the Sun Bitstream Apr-13-11 45
      RE: CR/NF: Holiday in the Sun Gryphonadmin Apr-10-11 35
          RE: CR/NF: Holiday in the Sun Bitstream Apr-10-11 36
          RE: CR/NF: Holiday in the Sun CdrMike Apr-11-11 41
          RE: CR/NF: Holiday in the Sun Phantom Apr-20-11 51
      RE: CR/NF: Holiday in the Sun Meagen Apr-11-11 39
          RE: CR/NF: Holiday in the Sun Matrix Dragon Apr-11-11 40
   RE: CR/NF: Holiday in the Sun Tzukumori Apr-12-11 42
      RE: CR/NF: Holiday in the Sun Matrix Dragon Apr-12-11 43
          RE: CR/NF: Holiday in the Sun Tzukumori Apr-12-11 44


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