Don't be embarassed by your early works - without them, they current stuff would never have come out. Everybody has to start somewhere, and nobody starts at the top...

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#include <nosig>

#91;...#93; in order to be a realist you must believe in miracles.
-- David Ben Gurion
EPU RCW #pi;
#include <stdsig.h>

Yeah, I know...

... but Secrets is really lame. :)

I think the main thing that bothers me about it is that it covers such an important event. If it were just a badly-plotted Exile story (like, oh, Ronin), I could get over it, but it's a badly-plotted Exile story that covers an event (the clearing of Gryphon's name) that really should have been done in a slightly-better-than-half-assed fashion. As it is, there're a few things I still like about it, but they're mainly minor asides. The "plot" is utter nonsense and most of the characterization makes me wince and groan as if poked with a sharp stick.

Ah, well. At least I can use it as the exemplar of my Crap Period. :)

--G.
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Benjamin D. Hutchins, Co-Founder, Editor in Chief, Netadmin
Eyrie Productions, Unlimited http://www.eyrie-productions.com/

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#include <craptastic.h>

#91;...#93; in order to be a realist you must believe in miracles.
-- David Ben Gurion
EPU RCW #pi;
#include <stdsig.h>