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Gryphonadmin
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Feb-26-10, 03:03 AM (EDT)
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"ES34 in-progress note #2"
 
   This will probably end up being several "issues", Manhunt style, but I haven't decided that for sure yet.

Here's another little taste:

        "So."  Mordin tapped his fingertips together briskly.  "Don't
wish to be rude, but have much work to do. If you don't need medical
attention, why are you here?"
"We just wanted to say hello. We may be in town for a while,
assuming Mayor Caspian doesn't throw us out, and you seem to be one of
the leading citizens."
Mordin ducked his head modestly. "Wouldn't go that far. Do
what I can. Own neck also on block, after all." Then, regarding
Gryphon thoughtfully, he added, "Not without influence, though. Will
see to it that you aren't ejected."
"Thanks. Why?"
"Practical considerations, primarily. Will need help against
Blue Suns. You two are survivors. Proved that just by getting this
far. Could be valuable members of community." He smirked slightly.
"If not, humans have saying: better that you're inside the tent
pissing out."
Gryphon laughed. "You have a point."

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BeardedFerret
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Feb-26-10, 04:09 AM (EDT)
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1. "RE: ES34 in-progress note #2"
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   ME-2 themed Manhunt-style multiparter set in the exile?

Sign me the hell up.

You nailed Mordin's dialogue by the way. In case you were concerned, yes you are still awesome at this.


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A Vile Gangster
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Feb-26-10, 06:22 AM (EDT)
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2. "RE: ES34 in-progress note #2"
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   Agreed, on all points. So far Gryph's 10 for 10 as far as accurately replicating the feel of the characters and their dialogue.

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SliderDaFeral
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Feb-26-10, 05:14 PM (EDT)
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3. "RE: ES34 in-progress note #2"
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   Once again, I swear to good Gryph is God at this sort of thing.


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