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Eyrie Productions, Unlimited
Offsides
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Aug-27-09, 03:19 PM (EDT) |
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"Omnibus 4!"
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Very nice - I really liked "Mr. Midshipman Tenjou: For the Good of the Service", it's a very Utena-ish thing to do. But I found the early breaks in the story without any real visual break to be rather difficult to follow. May I request a minor formatting change to make it a little clearer (such as an extra blank line)? Other than that, jolly good show! Offsides [...] in order to be a realist you must believe in miracles. -- David Ben Gurion EPU RCW pi; #include <stdsig.h> |
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Eyrie Productions,
Unlimited
Benjamin
D. Hutchins
E P U (Colour)
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