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trigger
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Nov-26-01, 03:41 PM (EDT) |
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"Most Excellent"
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Anne, Crown of Roses is superb. I particularly love the way you convey Anthy to the audience - as ancient, powerful, weak, and insecure. Her transformation from begining to end was believeable. Your descriptions of Cephiro, and the magic of Cephiro have also filled a hole in our pantheon. I'll looking forward to more of your writing in this arc. Kai Anne Cross! t. Trigger Argee trigger_argee@hotmail.com Manon, Orado, etc. Denton, never leave home without it.
Trigger Argee Manon, Maccadon, Orado, etc. Denton, never leave home without it. "This isn't exactly the Olympic Games." - Corwin of Amber |
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Offsides
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Nov-26-01, 03:44 PM (EDT) |
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1. "RE: Most Excellent"
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>Kai Anne Cross! > I second the motion. Kai Anne Cross!All in favor feel free to post here. All opposed can start a new thread :) Offsides #include <aye.h> #91;...#93; in order to be a realist you must believe in miracles. -- David Ben Gurion EPU RCW #pi; #include <stdsig.h> |
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juniper
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Nov-26-01, 07:10 PM (EDT) |
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2. "RE: Most Excellent"
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>Crown of Roses is superb. I particularly love the way you >convey Anthy to the audience - as ancient, powerful, weak, and >insecure. Her transformation from begining to end was believeable. >Your descriptions of Cephiro, and the magic of Cephiro have also >filled a hole in our pantheon. I'll looking forward to more of your >writing in this arc. <blush> Thank you. I will pass your thanks on to my Earthdawn players; most of my descriptive powers got practiced on them, and I wouldn't be anywhere near as competant without them. -- Juniper "Lift the world's lid!" ... "For the Revolution of the Restaurant!" -- Saionji and Miki
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Offsides
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Nov-26-01, 09:02 PM (EDT) |
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><blush> > >Thank you. I will pass your thanks on to my Earthdawn players; most >of my descriptive powers got practiced on them, and I wouldn't be >anywhere near as competant without them. > Nice to see fame isn't going to your head :) All kidding aside, you did a very good job not just telling the story, but fitting into the feel of the rest of SOS. That's what impressed me the most - this is the first SOS episode that doesn't have Gryphon as a "primary" author on it, but it doesn't feel out of place. I know he has a with credit, and is the EiC, but you can change too much as editor without making it noticable.Keep writing - I look forward to your next project, Eyrie or not! Please let us know if it's not Eyrie so we can find it anyway :) On a side note: Gryphon - I move that Anne be moved from an "Enthusiastic Personage" to an "Eyrie Productions Creative Staff", with all the rights and privaleges thereof. I know I have no say in this; it's just my opinion - but with a full author credit... Offsides #include <congrats.h> #91;...#93; in order to be a realist you must believe in miracles. -- David Ben Gurion EPU RCW #pi; #include <stdsig.h> |
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Gryphon
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Nov-26-01, 09:19 PM (EDT) |
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>On a side note: Gryphon - I move that Anne be moved from an >"Enthusiastic Personage" to an "Eyrie Productions Creative Staff", >with all the rights and privaleges thereof. I know I have no say in >this; it's just my opinion - but with a full author credit... Actually, that should probably have been done weeks ago. Sometimes my attention wanders... --G. -><- Benjamin D. Hutchins, Co-Founder, Editor in Chief, Netadmin Eyrie Productions, Unlimited http://www.eyrie-productions.com/
-><- Benjamin D. Hutchins, Co-Founder, Editor-in-Chief, & Forum Mod Eyrie Productions, Unlimited http://www.eyrie-productions.com/ zgryphon at that email service Google has Ceterum censeo Carthaginem esse delendam. |
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Perko
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Nov-28-01, 00:31 AM (EDT) |
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It has the flavor of a fairy tale, as opposed to space opera. This interesting change, and a completely different pacing method, make it seem more dream-like than the normal stories, which I thought was an excellent effect. Especially since she's in the land of fairy tales. -Craig Hmmm, can I say 'bombastic'? I knew I could... Well, the opinion still holds, despite the sesquipedelian wording. And that spelling is a vague guess. |
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