WOW! incredible, incredible work.. I was cackling in quite a few bits, and the ONLY thing that disturbs me is the thought that the release of such an.. apothesis (ba-dum *tish*) could prove damaging to future literary efforts.Aside from that, I'm still flying high, aided by chosen recreational chemicals.
(fatigue and hunger poisons, wheee)
Nit: That Russian Girl, whassername. Poor dear got very little screen time, but was very effective in using what she got.
Nit: uhm. Durandal went out a bit too quietly, in my opinion. Sure, we've got our suspicions, but VERY little evidence, especially given his penchant for being arcane and impenetrable.
Nit: Why'd Dan convert? I just didn't get it. Minor nit, 'cause that sort of conversion (Enemy - Ally) is almost an Eyrie 'trademark' by now : )
Note: Musical Scoring was fairly well done, I wish I had tracked my music selections during the read, my playlist held up well.
Note: ""ANTI-MATTER BEAM?!" Ikari blurted, rising to his feet and
wiping at his mouth with the back of his sleeve. "Kirishatov mounted
a DOUBLE-BARRELLED POSITRON ACCELERATOR on that monster?!""
Wonderful. WONDERFUL. Gendou Ikari as a hippie scientist. for some reason, his redemption has been one of the shining points of the _entire_ work of Eyrie Productions, in my experience. Not just the NXE universe.
Note: Star of David, natch. *chortle*
Note: And it's DJ Croft with the assist and SHINJI IKARI coming out of nowhere with the SCORE! GOOOOOOOOAAAAAAALLLLLLL!!!!
Thank you, gryphon.
Thank you, Eyrie.
...I'mma go eat something and pass out now.
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Kokuten Daysleeper
RCW #13013
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