Loved it. I totally need to re-read it again...which I will have plenty of time tonight from 11:30-12, 2:30-3, and 5:30-6 to do.
And I liked the HTML, but recognize that unless one of the fans comes up with a style sheet that works, it ain't happening. (this, in other parlance, is known as a broad hint, btw).
I think Laura is an interesting character, but has an all too familiar background - how many ronin-style folks are roaming this galaxy? And how many children has G. saved over the years from becoming the Ultimate Weapon(TM)? I also thought Skuld was slightly out of character (I mean, she turns pink!) but that could be the BatB treatment - I really didn't like watching that show because I couldn't accept some of the characterizations.
Also, nice shout-out to the current Batman line with the "red robin" reference.
I would love to see the fight sequence on Omega animated. damn. I honestly think it's a lot better than the NA sequence, although I loved the NA setup and the chase scene. one question - is that the same battledome Corwin fought in?
Anyway, an rollicking good yarn, and an excellent way to tie in the Exile to what ever you're calling the post-Future Imperfect.
Manon, Maccadon, Orado, etc.
Denton, never leave home without it.
"I hate to advocate drugs, alcohol, violence, or insanity to anyone, but they've always worked for me." - HST