I'm still giggling at the "Don't make eye contact" prank. Grushka was a rather interesting planet overall, with a simple, yet interesting backstory (Czerka never changes it seems). Fenn was fun, as was the guide.
The scene with Vader waking up was nice, with a nicely written reaction to being intact again. What I really liked though was his 'recruitment speech' to Rei. Really demonstrated the nature of this version of Vader, along with the way of the Sith.
Maybe it's the fact that I pulled Mass Effect out last night and finally finished it, but while Rei and co were driving around in the Mako, I couldn't help but think she has the suspension on hers better adjusted :P
Overall, fun story, enjoyed it.
Matrix Dragon, J. Random Nutter