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40. "minor revision"
In response to message #0
 
   I have adjusted the dialogue in the last scene, where Hannelore visits Gryphon to request his counsel regarding the letter she received from Fritz, to reflect developments in Gallian Gothic. This was surprisingly tricky to do for such a small edit, since I had to preserve the feeling of melancholy while simultaneously injecting a note of good news, but overall I think it works. It may even have lifted Hannelore's spirits a little and given her some hope that she could make her situation work after all.

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 (OWaW 15) D Plus 21,914 [View All] Gryphonadmin Jun-06-15 TOP
   RE: (OWaW) D Plus 21,914 Matrix Dragon Jun-06-15 1
   RE: (OWaW) D Plus 21,914 Terminus Est Jun-06-15 2
      RE: (OWaW) D Plus 21,914 TsukaiStarburst Jun-06-15 3
          RE: (OWaW) D Plus 21,914 BZArchermoderator Jun-06-15 4
              RE: (OWaW) D Plus 21,914 Proginoskes Jun-06-15 5
                  RE: (OWaW) D Plus 21,914 Gryphonadmin Jun-06-15 7
      RE: (OWaW) D Plus 21,914 Gryphonadmin Jun-06-15 8
          RE: (OWaW) D Plus 21,914 Terminus Est Jun-07-15 14
              RE: (OWaW) D Plus 21,914 Droken Jun-07-15 15
   RE: (OWaW) D Plus 21,914 Nova Floresca Jun-06-15 6
      RE: (OWaW) D Plus 21,914 Gryphonadmin Jun-06-15 9
          RE: (OWaW) D Plus 21,914 Droken Jun-06-15 10
              RE: (OWaW) D Plus 21,914 Gryphonadmin Jun-06-15 11
          RE: (OWaW) D Plus 21,914 Offsides Jun-06-15 12
      RE: (OWaW) D Plus 21,914 CdrMike Jun-06-15 13
   We have an extremely serious problem. The Traitor Jun-07-15 16
      RE: We have an extremely serious problem. Matrix Dragon Jun-07-15 17
          RE: We have an extremely serious problem. The Traitor Jun-07-15 18
              RE: We have an extremely serious problem. Verbena Jun-07-15 19
                  RE: We have an extremely serious problem. Matrix Dragon Jun-07-15 20
                  RE: We have an extremely serious problem. Gryphonadmin Jun-07-15 25
                      RE: We have an extremely serious problem. Verbena Jun-07-15 31
                          RE: We have an extremely serious problem. Gryphonadmin Jun-08-15 32
                              RE: We have an extremely serious problem. Verbena Jun-08-15 33
                                  RE: We have an extremely serious problem. Gryphonadmin Jun-08-15 34
                              RE: We have an extremely serious problem. CdrMike Jun-08-15 36
                                  RE: We have an extremely serious problem. Gryphonadmin Jun-08-15 37
                                  RE: We have an extremely serious problem. TsukaiStarburst Jun-08-15 38
                                      RE: We have an extremely serious problem. CdrMike Jun-08-15 39
              RE: We have an extremely serious problem. Gryphonadmin Jun-07-15 28
                  RE: We have an extremely serious problem. Verbena Jun-07-15 30
      RE: We have an extremely serious problem. Gryphonadmin Jun-07-15 21
          RE: We have an extremely serious problem. Droken Jun-07-15 22
              RE: We have an extremely serious problem. Gryphonadmin Jun-07-15 24
                  RE: We have an extremely serious problem. Terminus Est Jun-07-15 26
                      RE: We have an extremely serious problem. Star Ranger4 Jun-07-15 27
                          RE: We have an extremely serious problem. Matrix Dragon Jun-07-15 29
          RE: We have an extremely serious problem. TsukaiStarburst Jun-07-15 23
              RE: We have an extremely serious problem. gamlain Jun-08-15 35
  minor revision Gryphonadmin Sep-19-20 40
      RE: minor revision Verbena Sep-19-20 41


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