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MuninsFire
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Aug-02-19, 03:34 AM (EDT) |
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5. "RE: Repair Bench: Exodus 2:3"
In response to message #2
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>>Oh hey - yeah, that explanation works much better. I like it. > >It was convenient that we had already long since established that >Misato doesn't know shit about anything technological. Gave Maya and >Truss someone to explain it all to, without resorting to the clunky "I >am explaining this to someone who, logically, should know it better >than I do" stuff the AGSys guys do in the original version. > >Aye, that's pretty handy. Also, I liked how you kept the consequences of the original, but in a different 'shape' - as well as annotation of atmospheric conditions pertinent to the emergency In Xanadu did Kubla Khan A stately pleasure-dome decree Where Alph, the sacred river, ran Through caverns measureless to man Down to a sunless sea |
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