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zwol
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Aug-02-19, 10:21 AM (EDT) |
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6. "RE: Repair Bench: Exodus 2:3"
In response to message #5
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>>>Oh hey - yeah, that explanation works much better. I like it. I concur. >>It was convenient that we had already long since established that >>Misato doesn't know shit about anything technological. Gave Maya and >>Truss someone to explain it all to, without resorting to the clunky "I >>am explaining this to someone who, logically, should know it better >>than I do" stuff the AGSys guys do in the original version. > >Aye, that's pretty handy. Also, I liked how you kept the consequences >of the original, but in a different 'shape' - as well as annotation of >atmospheric conditions pertinent to the emergency Yes. There might be a typo, though, where it says "render a few hundred square miles upwind of the site uninhabitable" shouldn't that be "downwind"? |
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