>Kouze
>talking him down, more or less, was nicely done, followed by even more
>action and a rather desperate move, leading to the pair of them in the
>desert. Which, I assume was *sort* of an inverted varient of "How'd you solve the icing" gambit from the Iron man movie, in and of in this case it was the heat from re-entry cooking the Sturmvolgel's electronics (via the opening left by the ejection capsule) before it could finish Kouze or the heat did. In true movie fashion, though, we can see in our minds eye how the 21 'dies' moments before it can off Kouzu and then seconds later her own system fail, leaving Seraph Blue unable to recover but Kouzu able to manage the crash well enough to a) survive and b) be close enough to check on and help Guld. Without G having to SHOW us... in fact the way its written is even more powerfull because we JUST DONT KNOW until the POV arrives.
And G... AWESOME music choices, I especially love how you segued so smoothly from the top gun fighting music to the other awesome heroics implied by the music choices from Backdraft.
Oh, and props to Terror for Terrorizing Dyson but then letting him off the hook like any good Areojock knows how.
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