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1. "RE: Omnibus 4!"
In response to message #0
 
   >But I found the early
>breaks in the story without any real visual break to be rather
>difficult to follow.

That was what the unpunctuated italic lines were for (lest you think I hadn't thought of it at all), but I'll take it under advisement.

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  RE: Omnibus 4! Gryphonadmin Aug-27-09 1
      RE: Omnibus 4! eriktown Aug-27-09 2
          RE: Omnibus 4! Zox Aug-27-09 3
              RE: Omnibus 4! Star Ranger4 Aug-27-09 4
                  RE: Omnibus 4! Offsides Aug-28-09 12
   RE: Omnibus 4! Tabasco Aug-27-09 5
   RE: Omnibus 4! Prince Charon Aug-28-09 6
      RE: Omnibus 4! Rickdominated Aug-28-09 7
          RE: Omnibus 4! Zox Aug-28-09 8
          RE: Omnibus 4! JeanneHedge Aug-28-09 9
              RE: Omnibus 4! dbrandon Aug-28-09 10
              RE: Omnibus 4! Star Ranger4 Aug-28-09 11
                  RE: Omnibus 4! Prince Charon Aug-29-09 13
   RE: Omnibus 4! BeardedFerret Sep-03-09 14
      RE: Omnibus 4! JeanneHedge Jul-14-10 15


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