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"teaser/frag, GG Book 2 Act II"
 
  
Gryphon sat under the terrace awning of a brasserie in Colmar with Wolfgang and his barracks bag at his feet, nursing a cold Meteor and a sore head. The former was helping with the latter, as was the fact that the freak storm which had swept through the region had abated. The rain was still drumming on the awning above his head, but it was only ordinary mortal rain now, not the tempest that had helped sweep him off the road up in the hills north of town.

He made a mental note to write a nice thank-you letter to the proprietor of this establishment, who was staying open past his usual closing time so that Gryphon could await a ride home on his terrace with a steady supply of his beer. The man had even loaned him half a dozen towels to deal with the worst of his soddenness, incurred by staggering back down from the crash site in the rain. Really damned decent of him. And people said Gallians didn't cotton to foreigners.

The beeping of a horn heralded the arrival of his ride, as Shirley Yeager pulled up at the wheel of the Opel Blitz truck she'd swiped from the Luftwaffe during what she insisted on calling Operation Rocket Heist.

Rolling down her window, she leaned out and said, "I see you're alive, that's good! You want a hand with your bag?"

"Nah, I got it, thanks," Gryphon replied. "Let me pay my tab and we'll get out of here." Rising stiffly, he finished his beer, then went inside and pressed a larger sum of money on the publican than was strictly necessary, overriding the man's protestations by pretending to understand less Gallic than he did. Satisifed with his good deed, he went back out and put bag, dog, and self in the truck.

"I saw what was left of your jeep on the way down," Shirley remarked as she guided the Blitz back out of town. "The heck did you hit? It looks like a mine went off under it."

"Hell if I know," Gryphon replied. "I was trying to swerve around something in the road and the damn thing just let go on me. Next thing I know I'm lying up against a tree." He ruffled Wolfgang's head. "Lucky you were strapped in, huh, buddy?"

"Hrf," Wolfgang agreed.

"You look freezing," Shirley said. "Hold tight, we'll get you back to base. A nice bath, some dry clothes, get some hot soup into you. Lynne and Yoshika were already firing up the kitchen when I left."

"That sounds great. Hey, Shirley?"

"Yeah?"

"It's good to see you again."

Shirley gave him an odd look. "Are you feeling OK? You just saw me, like... six hours ago."

"Well," Gryphon replied with a faint smile, "it was a long six hours."

--G.
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  RE: teaser/frag, GG Book 2 Act II Astynax Sep-23-20 1
     RE: teaser/frag, GG Book 2 Act II Gryphonadmin Sep-23-20 2
         RE: teaser/frag, GG Book 2 Act II The Traitor Sep-23-20 3
  RE: teaser/frag, GG Book 2 Act II Gryphonadmin Sep-24-20 4

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1. "RE: teaser/frag, GG Book 2 Act II"
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   >Rolling down her window, she leaned out and said, "I see you're alive,
>that's good! You want a hand with your bag?"
>

This makes me wonder, are the witches not aware of G's rather significant durability advantages over baseline folks, or is it just a bit too easy to forget in practice so comments like that come automatically?
Or is there a joking tone I failed to pick up on (probably the most likely option now that I think about it, but my initial curiosity remains)?

>"That sounds great. Hey, Shirley?"
>
>"Yeah?"
>
>"It's good to see you again."
>
>Shirley gave him an odd look. "Are you feeling OK? You just saw me,
>like... six hours ago."
>

She should really give the man a break, he just suffered a (self inflicted, but G is not one to take half measures) head injury after all.

>"Well," Gryphon replied with a faint smile, "it was a long six
>hours."
>

In a sillier production, this would be the spot for a sly 4th wall break, possibly with laugh track (does anyone even still use those?)


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2. "RE: teaser/frag, GG Book 2 Act II"
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   >or is it just a
>bit too easy to forget in practice so comments like that come
>automatically?
>Or is there a joking tone I failed to pick up on (probably the most
>likely option now that I think about it, but my initial curiosity
>remains)?

Sort of both of the above. After all, witches are tougher than normal people anyway, so the fact that he's roundabout as tough as one of them passes largely unnoticed at this point. Besides, that kind of remark is practically automatic in their line of work. :)

>She should really give the man a break, he just suffered a (self
>inflicted, but G is not one to take half measures) head injury after
>all.

Well, you know, most of the blood washed off in the rain, and it's dark, so it's not super-obvious from where she's sitting that he hauled off and headbutted a tree a couple hours ago.

--G.
"I hate this part..." (WHUD)
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3. "RE: teaser/frag, GG Book 2 Act II"
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   Not sure why, but I just had the image of Remi and Gryph having this exchange from Red Dwarf by the side of the road before Shirley showed up...

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4. "RE: teaser/frag, GG Book 2 Act II"
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   This episode's running long, but it can't be helped! Should be able to drop it this afternoon, though.

--G.
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