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Gryphon
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Mar-21-21, 05:21 PM (EDT) |
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"GG3/III: Enfants de la Patrie"
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Remilia and her family are in Paris, waiting for the wheels of the bureaucracy to turn. And when at last they do, it's time to celebrate. Act III: "Enfants de la Patrie" A couple of administrative notes: The bad news: Despite how long it's taken to put together, this act is on the short side as GG episodes go. The possibly better news: That's partly because the draft was half again as long as this when I decided I should end this one where it ends (because otherwise, if I carried on to my originally planned endpoint, it would probably have ended up a double-length episode), so there's a substantial portion of Act IV already written. --G. -><- Benjamin D. Hutchins, Co-Founder, Editor-in-Chief, & Forum Mod Eyrie Productions, Unlimited http://www.eyrie-productions.com/ zgryphon at that email service Google has Ceterum censeo Carthaginem esse delendam. |
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Astynax
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Mar-21-21, 11:35 PM (EDT) |
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4. "RE: GG3/III: Enfants de la Patrie"
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LAST EDITED ON Mar-22-21 AT 09:01 PM (EDT) >"I'll have the evening papers sent up so you can gauge that for yourself, >Countess. I would say they are more bemused than anything, at least for the >moment. If I were a betting man, I would wager their editors are still trying to >find out when anyone last publicly acknowledged the existence of vampires." >"I must say, you don't seem particularly surprised," Flandre observed. >"Mademoiselle," said Berjeau with a slight twinkle, "this is one of the great >hotels of Europe—of the world! We have seen far stranger things in our time." >See, I'm not sure if the man simply has an epic poker face and flair for bravado, or if he actually has seen stranger, in which case he ought to write his memoirs and retire on the proceeds. >...the bands and solo acts the foursome encountered as they roamed from club to >club pleased her more often than not... but she wasn't sure what to make of the >women taking their clothes off. > I'm impressed, though I suppose not actually surprised, at Remilia's composure at being exposed to something that would have been quite scandalous by the standards she's most familiar with. I am mildly surprised that Flandre didn't have any noteworthy commentary on the shows. >That didn't really explain why bathing wasn't a problem, but that, Flandre >recalled from her long-ago studies under her mother, was magic for you. >Internal consistency was not one of its strong points. > So magic follows Bellisario's Maxim does it? >Flandre uttered a bestial snarl that would have alarmed both her sister and >Gryphon if they could've heard it, then doubled her efforts to match, towing >the waterlogged man to shore. > Given the directive/threat she hissed into his ear not a moment before I actually wonder what her current (cargo? passenger?) had to think about that snarl. Probably it is best for his dignity that his clothing was already soaked with less than pristine river water. >"Me, a sailor?" Wentworth scoffed. "I've no nautical skills at all. I'd be a >positive liability to any captain fool enough to take that bargain." > Well, at least the man is aware of his faults. Though that awareness probably contributed to his ill considered leap.
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ImpulsiveAlexia
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Mar-23-21, 01:12 AM (EDT) |
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8. "RE: GG3/III: Enfants de la Patrie"
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So, I got to thinking about things at work (always a dangerous proposition) and some threads from different parts of UF got crossed in my head, resulting in this thought: "Now that they're citizens, the real challenge begins. They only have 25 years to prevent the construction of the Centre Georges Pompidou." -IA. (received information not interpretable) |
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The Traitor
Member since Feb-24-09
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Mar-23-21, 09:17 AM (EDT) |
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10. "RE: GG3/III: Enfants de la Patrie"
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Or - and hear me out - it holds the beautiful, challenging Centre Georges Pompidou, which is exactly the same as in our timeline, but people don't despise it because it wasn't made of Bath stone in a boring Regency pastiche or, worse, an equally uninspired attempt at replicating Versailles. "The Centre Pompidou Is Good Actually" is not the weirdest hill I am willing to die on, but it's up there. =] --- "She's old, she's lame, she's barren too, // "She's not worth feed or hay, // "But I'll give her this," - he blew smoke at me - // "She was something in her day." -- Garnet Rogers, Small Victory FiMFiction.net: we might accept blatant porn involving the cast of My Little Pony but as God is my witness we have standards. Paris is a big city. There's space in it for buildings that are interesting. |
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Gryphon
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Mar-23-21, 02:00 PM (EDT) |
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12. "RE: GG3/III: Enfants de la Patrie"
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>"The Centre Pompidou Is Good Actually" is not the weirdest hill I am >willing to die on, but it's up there. =] > >Paris is a big city. There's space in it for buildings that are >interesting. I'm afraid I'm with Bill Bryson on this one. I like some of greater Paris's architectural oddities--that office building in La Défense with the hole in it, for instance--but the Pompidou is just ugly and bad. I mean, it's not Le Corbusier/Soviet Brutalist-style ugly and bad, it is at least weird, but it's still ugly and bad. --G. -><- Benjamin D. Hutchins, Co-Founder, Editor-in-Chief, & Forum Mod Eyrie Productions, Unlimited http://www.eyrie-productions.com/ zgryphon at that email service Google has Ceterum censeo Carthaginem esse delendam. |
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ImpulsiveAlexia
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Mar-24-21, 05:29 PM (EDT) |
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15. "RE: GG3/III: Enfants de la Patrie"
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LAST EDITED ON Mar-24-21 AT 05:30 PM (EDT) I actually find the staircase on the outside to be charmingly weird more than anything else. In fact, that's actually how I feel about the building as a whole based on the photos I've seen... It's just funny imagining it as some kind of eldritch location that must be fought off in different worlds for the good of humanity. -IA. (it's better than one of the buildings my community college courses were in at least) |
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Peter Eng
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Mar-23-21, 12:49 PM (EDT) |
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11. "RE: GG3/III: Enfants de la Patrie"
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"...It's not every day you get to meet a head of state." Upon re-reading, I imagine that Sakuya did this in part because it's an opportunity to make Meiling something new to wear. While Sakuya isn't bad with words, I get the impression that she shows love more in things like new clothing, a perfectly timed hot bath, and one's favorite dinner. Peter Eng -- Insert humorous comment here. |
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Gryphon
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Mar-23-21, 02:21 PM (EDT) |
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13. "RE: GG3/III: Enfants de la Patrie"
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>"...It's not every day you get to meet a head of state." > >Upon re-reading, I imagine that Sakuya did this in part because it's >an opportunity to make Meiling something new to wear. While Sakuya >isn't bad with words, I get the impression that she shows love more in >things like new clothing, a perfectly timed hot bath, and one's >favorite dinner. Well, you're not wrong. :) Sakuya spent a long time cultivating the virtue, if it is one, of taciturnity; before the age of 10, she had to keep her feelings to herself to survive, and after, she was in a situation where she didn't feel free to speak her heart for reasons that were less hostile, but no less compelling to her at the time. It's not really an issue any more, but old habits and all that... --G. -><- Benjamin D. Hutchins, Co-Founder, Editor-in-Chief, & Forum Mod Eyrie Productions, Unlimited http://www.eyrie-productions.com/ zgryphon at that email service Google has Ceterum censeo Carthaginem esse delendam. |
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